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PostSubject: Dex Nara ~~   Sat Apr 28, 2012 9:41 pm

Character Info
Character's Name: Nara, Dex
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance:
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* Height: 6'1"
* Weight: 168 pounds
* Eyes: Dark Brown
* Hair: Straight, Medium in length, Dark Brown
* Body Type: Athletic. Torso, Legs, Back, and Chest are all in shape.
Personality:
With the ability to become anyone's friend within a 30 seconds, Dex provides a friendly attitude when meeting for the first time. Although being very outgoing and friendly, Dex doesn't show mercy to those who betray their village or worse, if they betray their friends. Teamwork to him means everything. He believes that teamwork can overcome anything no matter what. Dex is they type of a person that can have a 12-hour conversation with pretty much anyone. Being very outgoing, he'll show you that he can truly be a friend and also show you that he will do anything to help his friends and his teammates. Dex can be a little immature but when it is time to show his mature side he doesn't fail to show it.

During simple missions, Dex will give 100% of his effort so that the mission can become a success. Seeing smiles in everyone's face is relative to him reaching the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow. Dex believes that if you truly believe in something, no matter what it is, it will come true. Faith and Determination is what fuels Dex into succeeding in life. Many adults only think of children as young, immature human beings but Dex prefers not to be called immature. when a strolling citizen is in need of assistance Dex will always help them no matter what the situation. He'll be the clown of the group but he will give his life to protect his family and his friends.

Not being able to see his mother a lot, he refers to his closest friends as his brothers and sisters. Dex will go the extra mile so that his friends can be happy with his effort. He is not a show-off because he believes that the one who is the most quietest is the strongest one. One who shows off his talents are always showing off their greatest tricks but Dex believes he can become stronger and that is the main reason he doesn't show off. Also because it makes him look like someone who cares more about appearance instead of their strong will. Dex also has bad sides to personality. He is very hard headed and whatever he says , he believes in it although the other person might have sufficient evidence to correct him. Dex likes to daydream a lot therefore he suffers in school and doesn't get the grades that he can truly get.

Nindo: If you strongly believe in it, then it will happen.
You will fail 100 times, but that is how you succeed.


Extra Info: Carries around a note in his back pocket from his Parents saying "Always believe"

The Shinobi
Origin: Konohagakure
Ninja Rank: Genin
Hidden Village: Konohagakure
Clan: Nara
Kekkei Genkai: N/A
Elemental Affinity: Water.

The Background
History
~Life before the academy~
When Dex was born he looked really happy. He grew up a very nice boy and made many friends. At the age of 1 Dex's grandfather gave him a shuriken to practice with, although Dex's parents were a little upset at his grandfather for giving him such a deadly weapon. The next day Dex threw his shuriken rapidly at the target but failed miserably, breaking the window. They all laughed as it was the first time Dex ever threw his shuriken. As years passed by he learned the basics of being a ninja and became very friendly with people he met while also playing outside his house. When Dex was 9 he had an amazing talent for throwing kunais and shurikens and hand to hand combat, when his grandfather asked him about jutsu's Dex had no idea what his grandfather was talking about. Dex would love to walk around his village and meet new people.As he began to grow older, He became a very helpful and friendly young boy. After Two months of training with shurikens and kunais and throwing them into trees in the backyard, he learned everything there is about weapons, you could say he was a weapons expert.

That’s what he wanted to become in his future. After the training, he still didn’t join the Academy as he didn’t want it to become a burden with his weapons training. His mother and father both discussed that he indeed had very good weapons skills but he needs to learn how to defend himself and become a ninja like his father. Dex furiously declined after his parents both decided he needed to go into the academy. When he was almost 13 years old he had an awful experience in life, he experienced the death of his Father. That day was a tragic day as Dex’s father died trying to save his wife when mysteriously two missing ninjas appeared in front of his house and knocked rapidly on the front door. Dex was scared as all he could do was hide under his parents bed, unprotected. When the fighting was over Dex got out from under the bed slowly and walked to the kitchen where all the ruckus was happening. He found a lot of blood as his mother was lying on the floor with many cuts on her body.

Dex was shocked and could not move, all he did was stare. He then went and ran next to his mother as he asked his mother what had happened. His mother was having a hard time as Dex quickly called some medical ninjas to help. He visited his mother at the hospital as the ANBU black ops were investigating the crime scene. Dex only slept with his mother at the hospital. The next day he asked his mother what had happened to father, his mom hesitated and stuttered when she said that his father died in action. Dex couldn’t believe what she said as he started crying when he heard the awful news. He dried up his tears from his face and had a serious face on when he said that he was going to be a ninja. His mother was both surprised and somehow happy as she asked why. Dex said that he wanted to be a ninja to protect his mother and his friends, even though weapons was his life , he would give that up and learn how to protect a fellow ninja and a family member. After several weeks being in the hospital, The ANBU black ops found the two missing ninjas and were arrested immediately and now Dex lives alone with his mother. Dex was going to start the Academy the next day. All he could think of was being a great ninja and protecting his love ones. The next day came as he happily arose from his bed. He went outside and ran to the Academy only to be astounded by its size. Dex was happy that day as he was starting his first day of the Academy.

~Ninja Academy~
Now Dex wasn't the top dog in his class but he did manage an awesome grade in his fighting class and was able to create some clones. He made many friends at the academy and trained real hard after school sometimes. At the Academy, he learned amazing stuff. He was the best Academy student in his weapons class as he would throw a kunai and hit the target with extreme accuracy. His teachers were impressed at his skills with kunais and shurikens but Dex wasn’t smart at his ninja skills as he had very little Chakra control, but that didn’t stop him. Everyday he would go in his backyard and train three jutsus required to master at the academy. His clone jutsu was good, but the clones would look like some strange creatures, He kept on training this and other jutsus such as, The transformation jutsu where he would transform as his mother for training, then there was the replacement jutsu where he would turn himself into a log after being hit.

He was training these three jutsus and was mastering them every day . There were times that he failed some tests and failed to complete various types of jutsus. At the academy he always requested to be seated in the front, his teachers saw potential in him as he would never give up on anything, even if he had no chance of completing it. His academy year was the best year of his life, he finally understood why his parents decided to put him in the academy. At his final test, Dex was nervous as he met his judges, who were His academy teachers, jutsu specialist teacher, and the ninja who ran the academy. They were all eyeing Dex as he needed to perform 3 jutsus. His weapons master came in and gave his report to the owner and teacher, they were impressed by the results as he passed the first part of the final exam. The second part was to complete three jutsus.

His academy teacher asked him to perform a transformation jutsu. Dex wasn’t nervous as he had completed this jutsu several times, He made the required handsigns as he transformed into his academy teacher, his academy teacher stood next to Dex as the owner and jutsu specialist teacher both observed at how similar they both looked. Both the owner and the jutsu specialist teacher both nodded as they decided that he moved on to the next jutsu. He performed the replacement jutsu and was replaced by a log. The teachers looked at each other and wrote down his score. Dex proceeded to his final and most important jutsu. He performed the hand signs and created a similar looking clone. Astounded, the teachers gave a round of applause to Dex as he passed the academy. He went home to give the announcement to his mother, he walked in and went in his mothers room. He woke her up and said that he was now a genin and pointed to his headband. He also said that he would have his ceremony in two days. After his ceremony he invited his grandfather to teach him some clan jutsus. Dex hopes to learn them all in the near future.


Skills and Abilities
Advanced Skills:
* Ninjutsu: 1
* Genjutsu:
* Taijutsu: 1
* Kenjutsu:
* Weapons Master: 3
* Puppetry:
* Fuuinjutsu:
* Ijutsu:

Unique Abilities:
* Major: Runs extremely fast. +2 to speed.
* Minor: Nara Clan- Gains access to learn all clan jutsus.
Weaknesses:
* Major: Easy Exhaustion - When running at draining speeds it takes away +2 Stamina from overall Stamina
* Minor: Slow Learner - Takes 200 more word count to learn jutsus.

Stats:
* Strength: 5
* Constitution: 5
* Stamina: 5
* Dexterity: 5
* Speed: 5
* Intelligence: 5
* Wisdom: 5
* Charisma: 5

Role-play Sample:
Today was a peaceful day in the Cloud Village. No annoying brats running around in the streets making loud noises as if it were a hobby and no one filling the streets with crap they don't need. These were the types of days Rioken liked and these were the days he'd want more often. Rio thought, Man Oh Man, if only Christmas was real then everyday would be like today. I swear on the maker that if anyone pisses me off today I'll bolt them straight to Konoha!'. Rioken was a calm person but get him on his bad side and you're asking for a battle. Obviously, if you were a team member he wouldn't take it serious because he' know it'd be a joke and jokes were okay around Rioken. Other than being a great day, it was also a boring day for Rioken. He decided that today was the day he was helping someone and that meant , accepting missions. If It's one thing Rioken loved it was accepting missions no matter how small or how large. He knows the importance of every mission and does not care what the requirements are for them. You tell him, he does it. Period. But before he could pass by the Raikage's Office , a civilian called out to Rio and asked for help. It was a woman about 6 feet tall. "Seeing a woman that big, I don't know what she'd be scared of" Whispered Rioken to himself. He ran over to help the yelling woman. After Rioken asks what the problem is, she point to a corner at her little store about 8x12. The problem was a 3 inch long rat. Rioken then sighed at first but quickly pulled out a smile as he knew he was helping someone today. He quickly threw a kunai at the rat's tail and the rat was caught, he couldn't escape and the little mouse started weeping. Rioken grabbed the rat and threw him 10 feet away from the store and it quickly ran away. The woman thanked him as Rio walked away waving his right arm to the woman.

As Rioken kept walking, he decided to give a quick visit to the Raikage and to hopefully be awarded a mission for the day. The building came into Rio's site and then he made a run for it. He thought, I don't know what it is about missions but boy oh boy do they sure make me hyper!" as he ran quickly to the office. He slowed down once he was the the Raikage's building front doors. He quickly opened them and was greeted by the lovely ninjas guarding his building. He ran up the stairs ( He jumped on the walls to go faster). He was then standing in front of the Raikage's office, he took a deep breathe because of all the running he did and jumping as well. He opened the door and was taken by surprise of 3 ninjas also giving the Raikage a visit. Rio had a lot of manners so before telling the Raikage about his mission he said hi to everyone. "Hello, everyone. I hope we're all having a good day now." said Rio as he walked passed all of them and then faced his superior master, The Raikage. "Sir, today is a great and peaceful day, no loud noises, no crimes, and nothing out of the ordinary and therefore I ask of you a mission. Today is a great day to help out our fellow cloud members. I'm ready for whatever you throw at me. Unless these other ninjas have something more important" said Rioken as he took a seat by the window.


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PostSubject: Re: Dex Nara ~~   Sun Apr 29, 2012 5:07 am

Okay all looks pretty good except for a few things.
First of is your Kekkei Genkai the Nara clan does not have a bloodline limit so you need nothing there.
For example:
Kekkei Genkai: None or N/A

Next is your Unique Abilities(UA) First is your Major: Speed. Runs 40 yards in 3.6 seconds, you need it to explain better according to the system. So I see you want to be fast so I would change it to this.
Example:
* Major: Speed - Runs Extremely fast plus 2 to speed.

Now for your Minor just like this
Example:
* Minor: Nara Clan- Gains access to learn all clan jutsus.

Now finally your weaknesses; these are in place to balance out your character for their UAs.

For your major weakness; Major: Runs a lot but gets exhausted faster than normal. This will look better if it actually is worked in with the stat system.
Example:
* Major: Easy Exhaustion - When running at draining speeds it takes away +2 Stamina from your over all stamina.
For example:
Speed
Stamina Used
Less than 25%
0
25 to 50%
1 +2
50 to 75%
2 +2
75 to 100%
5 +2
You don't need to add the table.

Now for your Minor Weakness; Minor Takes more than a sufficient amount of time to learn jutsus. It needs to be more in cooperated into the system.
Example:
* Minor: Slow Learner - Takes 200 more word count to learn jutsus.
For example:
Jutsu Rank
Word Count
E-Rank
300
D-Rank
500
C-Rank
600
B-Rank
900
A-Rank
1300
S-Rank
1800
You don't need to add the table.

Well that's all that needs to be fixed everything else is good. Fix those things and you will have my approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Dex Nara ~~   Sun Apr 29, 2012 1:26 pm

Thank you. I have updated my application and whenever you can you can take a look.
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PostSubject: Approved   Sun Apr 29, 2012 1:36 pm

Looks great can't wait to see you start rping.



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