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Age : 23
Location : Konoha

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PostSubject: Ren Izamu Nara   Sat Jun 16, 2012 10:21 pm

Character Info
Character's Name: Ren Izamu Nara
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance:
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He's 5'8" height and his skin is a little tanned. He has straight medium length black hair and Emerald green eyes that shine even in the darkness of the night like a cat. He was normally muscular. He wears a black sleeveless muscle shirt under a black coat, black pants with pockets, for scrolls if needed and other such things, he also wear black shinobi sandals. He's also wearing a pair of black fingerless gloves with metal bands on them and had the Kanji for Courage on them. Along with his kunai pouch strapped to his right thigh and shuriken pouch on his left.
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 100 pounds
Eyes: Emerald Green
Hair: Straight, Medium in length, Black
Body Type: Athletic, his body is mostly in shape
Personality: Ren personality is somewhat simple. Ren provides a friendly attitude when meeting for the first time. Although being very outgoing and friendly, Ren doesn't show mercy to those who betray their village or worse, if they betray their friends. Teamwork to him means everything. He believes that teamwork can overcome anything no matter what. To him, having a friend is like finding your true happiness, he honor friendship, honor, teamwork, but he mostly honor his friend and family over anything else.
Nindo: "My nindo is to protect those I care about, always being there for them, and always manage to make them smile, even in the presence of death"
Extra Info: If you somewhat managed to hurt one of his friends, then Kami better have mercy on your soul, because to Ren, that is the time to be merciless and unleash hell upon your life.

The Shinobi
Origin: Konoha
Ninja Rank: Genin
Hidden Village: Konohagakure no Sato
Clan: Nara
Kekkei Genkai: NA
Elemental Affinity: Wind Release

The Background
History:
-Pre academy
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-Academy
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-Genin
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Skills and Abilities
Advanced Skills:
Ninjutsu: 2
Genjutsu: 1
Taijutsu: 1
Kenjutsu: 0
Weapons Master: 1
Puppetry: 0
Fuuinjutsu: 0
Ijutsu: 0
Kyujutsu: 0


Unique Abilities:
Major: Great Intellect: +5 Intelligence free
Major: Great Chakra Control: Reduce the amount of chakra used for a Ninjutsu by 1/4.
Major: Blow you away: His wind release are one rank more stronger.
Minor: Nara Clan: Gains access to learn all clan jutsus.
Minor: Adept at Ninjutsu: Learns Ninjutsu quickly, due to his expanded chakra reserves, he is able to spend more chakra practicing jutsu. (100 less words when learning Ninjutsu)
Weaknesses:
Major: Chivalrous: Thanks to his mother training and respect for Kunoichis, Ren has trouble fighting women for the fact he will hold back his abilities and will do what he can to keep from killing the women. Ren will not kill a women unless he has no other choice and will hold back his abilities by a 1/4th of what they are for 5 posts before he will use his full abilities against a Women.
Major: Not a fire person: Can never learn fire techniques
Minor: Wind + Fire= Inferno: Fire release against Ren are counted one rank above

Stats:
Strength: 5
Constitution: 4
Stamina: 5
Dexterity: 4
Speed: 5
Intelligence: 8 (+2)
Wisdom: 6
Charisma: 3

Role-play Sample: This is from another site I am on
Ren just looked as Death left the area with Trouble still unconscious, but before they leave he feel in his back a pulse of dark aura...and then pain he never felt before wracked trough his body, he could feel the dark aura making him stronger, affecting his arms, making the muscle in them contract and tense, making them stronger, he feel like he could punch trough a tree or wall and it probably wouldn't hurt him, the legs were next, pulling and contracting the muscle, making them stronger, faster, and more agile, Ren could feel like running a marathon and not get tired, then came the his hands and feet...he feel an incredible amount of pain in his nails, as they were replaced by claws, Ren looked at his newer set of claws and say. "What the hell is happening to me...ARRGGHH!" Ren doubled over in pain as his upper body was next, his pecs and abs contracted and pulled the muscles there, making them stronger, his back also got more stronger, his lungs were working over time as well as his heart, pumping blood and air to his pain filled body, but then came his head, his eyes hurt a lot, as they gained better eyesight, as swell as slit instead of round pupils, his brain hurt a lot also, he feel like it was getting bigger or something, or was it just the pain screwing with his mind, then he tasted blood in his mouth and down his throat as his gums stretched, making room for more deadlier set of teeth and canines. As the pain finally leaved his body, he breathed a sigh of relief and just stood there in the ground, blinking his eyes and wondering. "What in Qinta's name just happened".


Last edited by Ren Izamu on Tue Jun 19, 2012 8:51 pm; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : edited to approve)
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PostSubject: Re: Ren Izamu Nara   Tue Jun 19, 2012 2:52 pm

Unique Abilities:
Minor: Great Intellect: +5 Intelligence free. This is actually a Major UA, just change from major to minor and you wil be fine.

Weaknesses:
Major: Hopeless at Puppetry (cannot manipulate puppets, human or not, with chakra) This one I got a bit of an issue with, I don't ever really seeing your character using these such skills and a weakness needs to balance out a character better. Now if you want you can add to it when fighting against puppet users intelligence and wisdom drops by 2. So it would look like this.
Example:
Major: Hopeless at Puppetry - Cannot manipulate puppets, human or tools, with chakra and when facing users that use puppet manipulation Ren will loose 2 points from wisdom and intelligence while facing someone using puppet manipulation and for 2 posts after.

Major: Chivalrous: Thanks to his mother training and respect for Kunoichis, Ren has trouble fighting women for the fact he will hold back his abilities and will do what he can to keep from killing the women. Ren will not kill a women unless he has no other choice and will hold back his abilities by a 1/4th of what they are for 3 posts before he will use his full abilities against a Women. This needs to be for five posts not three than that will be fine

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Just fixes those things and I would see no issues with your app.
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PostSubject: Re: Ren Izamu Nara   Tue Jun 19, 2012 8:44 pm

Edited and removed the hopeless at puppetry.
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PostSubject: Re: Ren Izamu Nara   Tue Jun 19, 2012 9:08 pm



Okay looks good and I see you are taking the free major and minor gof for you; all approved.
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